On-site dragon revisions

Whitefire wrote:idk... i didnt have a ref

also dunno :L just kinda throwing stuff around.

Look at the sprite, you can see it has horns....

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I'm going to go ahead and add the new green adult...

i'll either edit this post or post later the S2

squee? o3o

They are beautiful OOOOOOOOOO:

How the heck you learn how to do such good sprites...? Nvm, you should totally make some of your own dragons to be in the zone <33

Edit: I forgotten that there is an alt version of the green dragon, I can easily change the colours of the new Green dragon sprite if you want Whitefire.

lol nah I have enough projects already XD ._.

Altz

Omg those hatchlings....I want to nomz on them...NAW...They are so adorable <33

Edit: I would call the green dragon project done?

sure, finally -facedesk-

what's next |D

Hmm, Losk says that he'll do the AroKai dragon. I think meh Snow Lindwurm is fine o3o (I would be annoyed if someone asked me to redo it because it's one of my most proudest artwork :U) and maybe we/you can get working on Wolfie's dragons. Of course, with her permission.

I'm sorry, but the snow lindwurm isn't fine. It's way too flat and the arms don't look right, and the back spines are a tad odd to me too.

I don't know if I should feel insulted or agree with you.

Gecko is right, the sprite does have some issue that need to be addressed... things such as that the outline needs to be softer, the light source needs to be more defined, and some of the lines need smoothing, more contrast as well. No need to feel insulted as these crits are really to help you improve. It has good bones, but need some work.

Wise words Akari. I'm already working on it to try and improve it x3

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Any better...? I may edit the spines when I'm in the mode for them.

Adding Green~

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Now now, whitefire, don't get too ahead of yourself with the wiki, we still need to show Tiff's sprites...

As for the wiki, can we at least show my old sprites of what the green dragon used to look like?

Edit: Here's an better version of the S1 hatchling. The jagged lines and fins were bothering me.
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Tiffashy wrote:As for the wiki, can we at least show my old sprites of what the green dragon used to look like?

Edit: Here's an better version of the S1 hatchling. The jagged lines and fins were bothering me.
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Go look at it now XD

*Looks* Yay xD

Now someone tell me if my reshaded sprite is better or not for the Snow Adult :U

the reshade is tons, better, but there still is room for improvement. Some places the shading is pretty good, save for the occasional random pixel, (like in the neck and cheeckbone and tail curve and shoulder) but in other places, it just has little texture to it. also, the contrast in the blues could be upped, last, it coulduse someredlining

Edit: as for the hatchlings, they look rather flat and pillowy as well, and the shading definately could be improved to show all of the curves, dips, bumps, and texture to their bodies.

Edit again: oh and the outlines would improve the sprites by thousands if they matched the color fo the dragons, the black makes it look very choppy.

Shadowwolf6 wrote:Adding Green~

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Now now, whitefire, don't get too ahead of yourself with the wiki, we still need to show Tiff's sprites...

yay and lol sorry... i'll go do that if it hasnt been already |D

EDIT: wolfie ninja wolfie

EDIT2: i had to stare at my name to figure out why it was green. lol im an idiot

Akari wrote:the reshade is tons, better, but there still is room for improvement. Some places the shading is pretty good, save for the occasional random pixel, (like in the neck and cheeckbone and tail curve and shoulder) but in other places, it just has little texture to it. also, the contrast in the blues could be upped, last, it coulduse someredlining

Edit: as for the hatchlings, they look rather flat and pillowy as well, and the shading definately could be improved to show all of the curves, dips, bumps, and texture to their bodies.

Edit again: oh and the outlines would improve the sprites by thousands if they matched the color fo the dragons, the black makes it look very choppy.

But I still have no idea what you mean by the black o3o

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Looks better to meh o3o

Would you mind if I did some redlining to your adult sprite to help clean up the lines a little?

*Shrugs* I guess. Sure, have an go at it.

Sorry, it took much longer than I expected, there were some delays.. in anycase, I have made some suggested edits to your sprite:

No offense, but the edits arent very good. I like the original MUCH better :X the front legs now look super super weird, as though the dragon isnt able to support its weight. And its face looks very grumpy,

Well, the other sprite's mouth was open, in an annoyed sort of way, in this one, it's as if it's about to strike...
I'm so-so with both...

Akari wrote:Sorry, it took much longer than I expected, there were some delays.. in anycase, I have made some suggested edits to your sprite:

I like the edits [not that it matters in not the concepter lawl], though IMO the redlines need redlines [and overall needs redlines], even though they do improve the sprite a bit. The near front arm is somewhat noodly and the far paw a tad lumpy, the body-tail transition is too thin [and the tail in general is still too thick, esp at the base], though it is much smoother <3

Ugh, I'll just get working on my own sprite by myself since I'm the one whom created the Snow. I'll do the edits by myself and if I want the snow to stay the same, then you cannot change my mind.

Akari, you did do an good job on the outlining but now thinking about it, I would rather complete my own sprite by myself for now.