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On-site dragon revisions
Tiffashy- Posts : 833
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- Post n°26
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You can just stick with any poses you want, as long it's not too difficult for chu. My mum lately had been trying to work out what kind of websites I been going to which annoys me when she likes pats my head and press her nose against the screen when I'm doing an RP post e.e
Whitefire- Posts : 68
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- Post n°27
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Look, progress update.
Dat front leg is grr. Oh and don't look at the tail i hate it.
Dat front leg is grr. Oh and don't look at the tail i hate it.
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- Post n°28
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Ooh I like it <3
Silverlight138- Posts : 284
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- Post n°29
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Crits :
XD
1) front leg is too thin, shoulder should be bigger
2) back leg looks... Fat (not very sure about this)
3) and yea, tail needs smoothening
4) there's this weird mass of lines at the wing membrane.. Not sure what that is for XD
Overall, great sprite, I love it's head!
I'm good with tails but legs hate me XD
XD
1) front leg is too thin, shoulder should be bigger
2) back leg looks... Fat (not very sure about this)
3) and yea, tail needs smoothening
4) there's this weird mass of lines at the wing membrane.. Not sure what that is for XD
Overall, great sprite, I love it's head!
I'm good with tails but legs hate me XD
Whitefire- Posts : 68
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- Post n°30
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I already know whats wrong :P people from the chat.
... That tends to happen when things sit. -shrugs- i'll post some examples later.
Naw man, im just gonna redo the tail. i left that on so people wouldn't go ' ders no tail, you forgot the tail durhurhur' because i know SOMEONE would have done that :P
meh. WIP WIP is WIP.
... That tends to happen when things sit. -shrugs- i'll post some examples later.
Naw man, im just gonna redo the tail. i left that on so people wouldn't go ' ders no tail, you forgot the tail durhurhur' because i know SOMEONE would have done that :P
meh. WIP WIP is WIP.
Whitefire- Posts : 68
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- Post n°31
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Obviously still a WIP. I hate the wing shading. gonna try something else later.
I thinned up the hind leg slightly, though i think the shading helped. Poked the other areas mentioned too. o3o
Sitting makes the muscles/fat kinda squish together, like if it's stretched out it looks thinner. :L
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- Post n°32
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Looks great Whitefire <3
Keep up the great work :'D
Keep up the great work :'D
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- Post n°33
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didn't poke the wing yet, but look, shiny. kindof eh at the depression... might lower that or something.
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- Post n°34
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Very gold and shiny o:
Well it looks good for me.
Well it looks good for me.
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- Post n°35
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Hmmm i think its too gold and shiny ><
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- Post n°36
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I think it looks amazing O.O
(Now we need to steal Whitefire to do awesome shading on our plans for Golden Eastern 8D)
(Now we need to steal Whitefire to do awesome shading on our plans for Golden Eastern 8D)
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- Post n°37
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lol that was actually my goal, silver. thought it would bring it a bit more uniqueness than 'its green... and orange. or is that yellow? bah'
i can change it if enough people want.
and SWolf, whut?
RL and stuff, parents are like 'you spend too much time on the computer, youre gonna get fat and be a crazy cat lady when you grow up surrounded by cat carcasses because you never get off your butt and feed them, they'll all die' love you too guys
i can change it if enough people want.
and SWolf, whut?
RL and stuff, parents are like 'you spend too much time on the computer, youre gonna get fat and be a crazy cat lady when you grow up surrounded by cat carcasses because you never get off your butt and feed them, they'll all die' love you too guys
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- Post n°38
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Since I got no response about the gold and no one objected to the wing shading anywhere [here nor on the chat], I guess i'll just leave both [unless those last-minute people decide to speak up -_-']. Shaded the outline.
Sooo...
...
I'll do the hatchies later...?
btw, i didnt think to post htis before, but doesn't this belong in at least Site Discussion?
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- Post n°39
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Indeed it does...Whitefire wrote:
Since I got no response about the gold and no one objected to the wing shading anywhere [here nor on the chat], I guess i'll just leave both [unless those last-minute people decide to speak up -_-']. Shaded the outline.
Sooo...
...
I'll do the hatchies later...?
btw, i didnt think to post htis before, but doesn't this belong in at least Site Discussion?
Moving now :D
And this should be stickeh
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- Post n°40
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(Maybe add this to wiki Wolfie?)
Sure, do the hatchlings...
Around the gold/yellow part, I do like it, but its far too bright and needs to be more yellow then gold.
Sure, do the hatchlings...
Around the gold/yellow part, I do like it, but its far too bright and needs to be more yellow then gold.
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- Post n°41
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Tiffashy wrote:(Maybe add this to wiki Wolfie?)
Sure, do the hatchlings...
Around the gold/yellow part, I do like it, but its far too bright and needs to be more yellow then gold.
This. As far as possible, I suppose the new rendition of the original sprite should adhere to the owner's wishes.
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- Post n°42
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okie dokie~ my screen is perm over saturated so while it looks more orange on my screen it might look yellow or orange or gold [or green-tinted o_0] on others'
ill poke that when i can find time, mom is all up in a wad about the computer :(
ill poke that when i can find time, mom is all up in a wad about the computer :(
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- Post n°43
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Eeeks, I hate it when they do that > Hahah but well, about the sprite, the gold is lovely, but it doesn't really suit the green dragonXD
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- Post n°44
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WE HAVE A WIKI? O.o WHY DIDNT ANY ONE TELL ME! or will I make a wiki?
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- Post n°45
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LAwwll freeze, *pokes announcement board* or was it the news board? O.O
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- Post n°46
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... it's in site discussion luls
better? o3o
better? o3o
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- Post n°47
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https://2img.net/h/i1093.photobucket.com/albums/i438/WhiteEmber/FairyDragon.jpg
fairy sketch? would poke the hind legs to make it look not so phat o3o
fairy sketch? would poke the hind legs to make it look not so phat o3o
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- Post n°48
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Fairy has horns XDWhitefire wrote:https://2img.net/h/i1093.photobucket.com/albums/i438/WhiteEmber/FairyDragon.jpg
fairy sketch? would poke the hind legs to make it look not so phat o3o
Soo... we're not keeping old lines?
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- Post n°49
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idk... i didnt have a ref
also dunno :L just kinda throwing stuff around.
also dunno :L just kinda throwing stuff around.
Tiffashy- Posts : 833
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- Post n°50
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Ooh much better <3
Now I'll say the adult is done for now. The fairy dragon you drawn is very cute c:
Now I'll say the adult is done for now. The fairy dragon you drawn is very cute c: