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    Post  Tiffashy Sat Jun 02, 2012 10:48 am

    You can just stick with any poses you want, as long it's not too difficult for chu. My mum lately had been trying to work out what kind of websites I been going to which annoys me when she likes pats my head and press her nose against the screen when I'm doing an RP post e.e
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    Post  Whitefire Thu Jun 07, 2012 4:41 am

    Look, progress update. On-site dragon revisions - Page 2 2hi73m9
    Dat front leg is grr. Oh and don't look at the tail i hate it.
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    Post  Tiffashy Thu Jun 07, 2012 9:35 am

    Ooh I like it <3
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    Post  Silverlight138 Thu Jun 07, 2012 12:15 pm

    Crits :

    XD

    1) front leg is too thin, shoulder should be bigger
    2) back leg looks... Fat (not very sure about this)
    3) and yea, tail needs smoothening
    4) there's this weird mass of lines at the wing membrane.. Not sure what that is for XD

    Overall, great sprite, I love it's head!

    I'm good with tails but legs hate me XD
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    Post  Whitefire Fri Jun 08, 2012 1:09 am

    I already know whats wrong :P people from the chat.

    ... That tends to happen when things sit. -shrugs- i'll post some examples later.

    Naw man, im just gonna redo the tail. i left that on so people wouldn't go ' ders no tail, you forgot the tail durhurhur' because i know SOMEONE would have done that :P


    meh. WIP WIP is WIP.
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    Post  Whitefire Sun Jun 10, 2012 8:53 am

    On-site dragon revisions - Page 2 Suzvnm

    Obviously still a WIP. I hate the wing shading. gonna try something else later.

    I thinned up the hind leg slightly, though i think the shading helped. Poked the other areas mentioned too. o3o

    Sitting makes the muscles/fat kinda squish together, like if it's stretched out it looks thinner. :L
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    Post  Tiffashy Sun Jun 10, 2012 12:11 pm

    Looks great Whitefire <3
    Keep up the great work :'D
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    Post  Whitefire Sun Jun 10, 2012 12:56 pm

    On-site dragon revisions - Page 2 Dwonxj

    didn't poke the wing yet, but look, shiny. kindof eh at the depression... might lower that or something.
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    Post  Tiffashy Sun Jun 10, 2012 5:21 pm

    Very gold and shiny o:
    Well it looks good for me.
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    Post  Silverlight138 Sun Jun 10, 2012 7:51 pm

    Hmmm i think its too gold and shiny ><
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    Post  Wolven Sun Jun 10, 2012 8:16 pm

    I think it looks amazing O.O

    (Now we need to steal Whitefire to do awesome shading on our plans for Golden Eastern 8D)
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    Post  Whitefire Sun Jun 10, 2012 10:51 pm

    lol that was actually my goal, silver. thought it would bring it a bit more uniqueness than 'its green... and orange. or is that yellow? bah'

    i can change it if enough people want.


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    Post  Whitefire Tue Jun 12, 2012 4:20 am

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    Since I got no response about the gold and no one objected to the wing shading anywhere [here nor on the chat], I guess i'll just leave both [unless those last-minute people decide to speak up -_-']. Shaded the outline.

    Sooo...

    ...

    I'll do the hatchies later...?


    btw, i didnt think to post htis before, but doesn't this belong in at least Site Discussion?
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    Post  Wolven Tue Jun 12, 2012 5:32 am

    Whitefire wrote:On-site dragon revisions - Page 2 28tw2s2

    Since I got no response about the gold and no one objected to the wing shading anywhere [here nor on the chat], I guess i'll just leave both [unless those last-minute people decide to speak up -_-']. Shaded the outline.

    Sooo...

    ...

    I'll do the hatchies later...?


    btw, i didnt think to post htis before, but doesn't this belong in at least Site Discussion?
    Indeed it does...
    Moving now :D
    And this should be stickeh
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    Post  Tiffashy Tue Jun 12, 2012 6:57 pm

    (Maybe add this to wiki Wolfie?)

    Sure, do the hatchlings...

    Around the gold/yellow part, I do like it, but its far too bright and needs to be more yellow then gold.
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    Post  Silverlight138 Tue Jun 12, 2012 7:27 pm

    Tiffashy wrote:(Maybe add this to wiki Wolfie?)

    Sure, do the hatchlings...

    Around the gold/yellow part, I do like it, but its far too bright and needs to be more yellow then gold.

    This. As far as possible, I suppose the new rendition of the original sprite should adhere to the owner's wishes.
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    Post  Whitefire Wed Jun 13, 2012 7:24 am

    okie dokie~ my screen is perm over saturated so while it looks more orange on my screen it might look yellow or orange or gold [or green-tinted o_0] on others'

    ill poke that when i can find time, mom is all up in a wad about the computer :(
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    Post  Silverlight138 Wed Jun 13, 2012 12:41 pm

    Eeeks, I hate it when they do that >Sad Hahah but well, about the sprite, the gold is lovely, but it doesn't really suit the green dragonXD
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    Post  freezerpup Wed Jun 13, 2012 7:39 pm

    WE HAVE A WIKI? O.o WHY DIDNT ANY ONE TELL ME! or will I make a wiki?
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    Post  Silverlight138 Wed Jun 13, 2012 7:49 pm

    LAwwll freeze, *pokes announcement board* or was it the news board? O.O
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    Post  Whitefire Thu Jun 14, 2012 12:33 am

    ... it's in site discussion luls

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    Post  Whitefire Thu Jun 14, 2012 5:34 am

    https://2img.net/h/i1093.photobucket.com/albums/i438/WhiteEmber/FairyDragon.jpg

    fairy sketch? would poke the hind legs to make it look not so phat o3o
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    Post  Wolven Thu Jun 14, 2012 5:35 am

    Whitefire wrote:https://2img.net/h/i1093.photobucket.com/albums/i438/WhiteEmber/FairyDragon.jpg

    fairy sketch? would poke the hind legs to make it look not so phat o3o
    Fairy has horns XD
    Soo... we're not keeping old lines?
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    Post  Whitefire Thu Jun 14, 2012 5:59 am

    idk... i didnt have a ref

    also dunno :L just kinda throwing stuff around.
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    Post  Tiffashy Thu Jun 14, 2012 4:22 pm

    Ooh much better <3
    Now I'll say the adult is done for now. The fairy dragon you drawn is very cute c:

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