Fallen Angel

Awesome sauce
Now I can't wait to see your skills with eggs :D

Wait... is it me or is the poor thing missing a leg O.o

Shadowwolf6 wrote:Wait... is it me or is the poor thing missing a leg O.o

Shhhhh...... lmao I was hoping no one would notice.....XD

XD
It needs a leg!
Otherwise... how can it go around doing its.... dragony.... goaty.... stuff?

I'll try to add a leg XD but later since I''m half asleep and it's 2 AM here....

XD

Turns out I did it now...

Looks much better n_n

Sorry I haven't been working on this, so many funerals.... I'll try to finish it up and start on the eggs....and the second stage

KingAce wrote:

Sorry I haven't been working on this, so many funerals.... I'll try to finish it up and start on the eggs....and the second stage

That's ok, real life is more important then some random adoptable site XD

The dragon's color still screams this http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-78TAXVB4k4w/Tlqkp_lB25I/AAAAAAAAAaU/PXBudfNKO9k/s1600/purple+goat.jpg at me instead of http://images2.layoutsparks.com/1/197006/fallen-angel-wings-image.jpg
To be honest, I don't think it's colors aren't so...Yeah :3

I think the shading should be more definite, coz it does look a little flat right now.

KingAce wrote:

Sorry I haven't been working on this, so many funerals.... I'll try to finish it up and start on the eggs....and the second stage

The lines need smoothing, especially the back and wings. Needs more definition and contrast in general, and less saturation. The back could be arched more, especially in that pose. Neck also looks like it's too sharply pointing downwards. [also, little personal opinion here, it might look that much cooler if the head was facing down]

Well I haven't even done the shading for one thing, I'm still tweaking the lines, as I said before I haven't been working on it... I've had 3 funerals in the past 3 weeks... And frankly, the back is how I want it cause this dragon is following a REALLY specific sketch...the colors are also specific as in the numeric color code. I have a really low self-esteem so even people just trying to help can make me give up, which I pretty much have...I didn't ask for crits for a reason...

If you don't accept crits then you will never get any better. But I understand about the low self esteem thing... sorry to hear about the... how do i word this... the, um, funerals

And things most of the time that follow sketches /exactly/ don't turn out well and have to be smoothed and edited. My crits still stand. The colors atm on my screen are VERY saturated and I can't look at it for too long without getting a headache. I'd be willing to help out if I wasn't busy enough D:

I accept crits but only from three people, they are all professional spriters who have been doing it for awhile and know how to word it in the way that won't make me blow up, I have Shitzotypal Personality Disorder and there are things I have to be careful with. but Thank You. I will take your advice about the neck, though I can't change the colors again but I may change the name...

Just saying this, Whitefire is an expirenced spriter, she's come from DC, where she has made a number of different sprites. Some of these have made it to the completed list. Including the: Banana Pygmy, Garden dragons (A whole series) and Giant Pygmy. Pygmys require more skill then normal-sized. It will do well to take in crits from anyone, they can help many things, not just the dragon.

Shadowwolf6 wrote:Just saying this, Whitefire is an expirenced spriter, she's come from DC, where she has made a number of different sprites. Some of these have made it to the completed list. Including the: Banana Pygmy, Garden dragons (A whole series) and Giant Pygmy. Pygmys require more skill then normal-sized. It will do well to take in crits from anyone, they can help many things, not just the dragon.

I am taking her crits, I just can't have too many crits at once or I start ripping my skin off...and it's not very pretty.

KingAce wrote:

I am taking her crits, I just can't have too many crits at once or I start ripping my skin off...and it's not very pretty.

Sounds painful too e.e

Shading does look better, but I'll leave other people to say if it's enough XD

my sis is finnishing the dragon she has ben havng alot of skoolwork, and medical issues wit her skitzofrennia

Sabotage wrote:my sis is finnishing the dragon she has ben havng alot of skoolwork, and medical issues wit her skitzofrennia

Oh noz!
Take your time, King Ace, real life is more important!

I think curving the neck, and angling the head a little more downwards, while placing both paws on the ground and really defining the shoulders would really help these give a more "Fallen Angel" look. o3o

Sextonator wrote:I think curving the neck, and angling the head a little more downwards, while placing both paws on the ground and really defining the shoulders would really help these give a more "Fallen Angel" look. o3o

Okay I'll try to do that, I have to wait a while before I work on it... my doctor screwed up my meds... SPEED, is not a nice one.... I might change the color, but the wing colors are staying the same....

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