Shearous Dragon

Really really confused
Like which wing needs work on?

Here! :D

It would barely have enough room to place in the hooks o:

Nuuuu, I just used to reddish stuff to randomly color the part that you should fix, so don't follow to it exactly XD the main point is, you need to smoothen the lines at the part I colored. OH GOSH THIS COMMUNICATION PROBLEM IS CRAZY XD

e3e better... but lacks knees [dragon knees... this would be eh for cat hind legs and i think almost spot on for a sitting kangaroo rat :P]. And the tail is still jagged.. the wing arms could be thickened and given some muscle definition [yes you can do that in lines too, not just shading]. Arms have some leetle squiggles too e3e and the neck. and chest. and...

... im gonna go post some tutorials now so i can help without being a buttface :L

I can fix the sprite as I shade it, that's if you want me to?

That would be so helpful Aislein <3

*Bumping*

So how the Spirte going? C:

LOL, *le impatient too*

sorry for not posting in a while I had to wait for my internet to be transfered to the new house, but here's what I have so far

Ooh great job of shading <33
But one problem, it's the wrong colour. The pink-brown is mean't to be black, but I can always change the colour with ease if chu want me to Aislein.

You can change it or I can, it doesn't really matter to me

Ooh I like it :3

We call it completed or we wait for more crits?

Second thoughts, I need to do deeper shading on both hatchlings and complete the egg crackings.

I'd wait for more crits but it looks good otherwise

The arms need to be changed, I couldn't tell at first if that was both arms or if the hand was messed up. The thing that appears to be a chest looks too pointy, And it doesn't look like the other head is attached to it. The hind legs don't look right and the feet look like stubs with little pointy bits. But nice choice in colors, the little markings are a nice touch.

m'kay I suppose I could poke at it some more

...I can't stop staring at the beautiful wing shading you made Aislein <33 They look metallic and amazing teehee :'D

As for the legs, they are correct.

They can look an little kangaroo like. Perhaps they have good muscles and the shape of a kangaroo leg because they are designed for jumping. Anyway, I can't see any ways of changing them and look better then the kangaroo leg. Too hard.

Edit: Unless you can do better yourself.

GAHHH, GIMME THOSE WINGS >:D

The other head still doesn't really look like it's attached to the chest, and the feet still look like little stubs with points on the end.

Dooon't chu give up on this.