Drakendeer Dragon

Le edited last post~

I don't really understand what you mean by the scary legs xD
They look fine to me o3o

We also need descriptions >D

*pokes shadow for a professional critique*
XD

hmmmmmmm a description.... lets see....

UGH I cant stop staring at the hatchies hahaha

The Drakendeer Dragon is famous for it's deer like appearance. They do like hiding in mountains and woods where it's difficult to spot them. When born, they keep their white spots for life. They aren't very big like other dragons, they are around an full grown horse size. Very rarely, some Drakendeers are born white which makes them much rarer then the normal brown-golden coat Drakendeers. When threaten, they will chase their threats away or either put up an fight with their threat. The female Drakendeer is called an Doe while the male one is called an Buck. They aren't very aggressive. They are more like the shy hiding breed that avoids anything that seems dangerous and come out in the afternoon or dawn to hunt.

I'm still trying to fix the legs D:

Edit:
Any better?

Drakendeer Dragons are famous and highly known for their deer-like characteristics and appearances. They dwell in dense woods and secluded mountain terrains which conceals their presence well, making them extremely difficult to spot. After the birth of a hatchling, these dragons keep their white spots for the rest of their lives. They aren't very big like other dragons, but rather more of an average horse's size. Very rarely, some Drakendeers are born white which makes them much rarer then the normal golden-brown coated Drakendeers. When threatened, they will chase the threat away, though it often comes down to a fight. The female Drakendeer is called a Doe, whereas males are called Bucks. Being a relatively docile and non-aggressive breed, Drakendeers tend to avoid potential dangers, skirting around nervously, and only being highly active in the dawn or high noon.



Better? ^_^



ninja'd : yeap yeap! it looks better now, all that's left is the mane. which looks like it needs just a LIIITTTTLLE bit of tweaking.

Much better <3

Edited legs again cause they keep bothering me >:3



You are da pro with the mane so can you do it? :>

MUCH better, the shading of the legs are MUCH MUCH MUCH MUCH MUCH BETTER! :DDDD

sigh I don't even know what I did with the mane. Oh well il try to do what I did XD


BTW, I cant seem to decide what colors go well with this dragon:

Oooh I like the colours <3

Imma make the crack marks for the egg and wait for you to poke the mane then I'll recolour it and make the alt xD

Edit: Here ya go~






We need to decide how common it should be o:

I just started on the mane, coz I realized you didnt shade the two inner legs XD


EDIT: which file format do I change to if I don't want the stupid checkers when i start erasing stuff?

Oh gosh, sorry XD

Nawwww its fine <3

*pokes previous post*

You change it to GIF I think o:

i tried it, it doesn't freaking work T^T oh well guess il just make do with png >< ARGHGHGHGHHG DAMN i cant do any more spriting for now, my mum is coming home in 5 mins. *rushes off to switch of the computer*

maybe she'd allow me to use the com after i study, since today is Friday anyway.

Yeah I had the same problem with my sprites ;;
Just use the white pencil if you want to ease anything, that's how I done it xD

Better? I swear I have no idea what I was doing O.O

It does look better o:

Lets get Wolfie to get over and give us crits >D

I shall give you the magical crits of doom now.

Legs are bothering me, the joins look wierd. You can use this to help.
Could we have a defined mouth? A lot of dragons, don't seem to be getting mouths...
With deer's markings, they only tend to have spots as young fawns. As they grow older they fade. Maybe have them grow faint at S2?
The line defining the foreleg and body shouldn't be that defined, shorten it down a bit, it looks like it's been stuck on.
The mane needs to look more fur-like
The neck is waaaaay too thin
Back leg is joined too far down
Both back legs need to be level, these two are in different places
They eye just looks like a dot. Maybe giving it more shape?
This dragon doesn't say "Dragon". It says deer. The wings had helped it look more draconic.

Sorry about that long list of crits, but you've got to start somewhere XD

Murrr, that is a lot o:

I'll get working on them once I feel like it xD

T_T --> that's all I can say for now. XD

I could probably help with some bits, Tiff, if you need any help XD

YES PLEASE <33

Tiffashy wrote:YES PLEASE <33

Onto it XD

Lawl, awesomesauce C:

*Pokes*

Just bumping this thread up. Where did Wolfie go? o3o

Woops!
Sorry, I'll finish of the redlines... /forgetfull

Lawl alright xD
Can't wait to see them c: