StarBurst Dragon

StarBurst Dragon

Egg:
S1:
S2:
Adult:

Adult Sketch:

Oopooohh an eastern dragon 8D
Gonna be stalking this >3

XD Its pretty Awesome looking!!

^ True dat C:

Thanks I'll start the lines later today if I can get on the computer long enough to start lining

^ Awesomesauce <3

finally finished the spritelines



crits?

The front legs look just a little out of place.

Beautiful tail lines <3
the only crits I have is that you need an smoother back, looks too narrow o:

how's this



better?

Much <3

StarBurst dragon body is shaded the flaming mane is not



crits please

Looks fine, but the legs are a little wonky looking >_<

The contrast is very good, the feet look very round and loose hanging.

It's annoying how I can spot other people's wonky legs, but I can't when I'm spriting my own dragon T_T

Actually it could use some more contrast. It also seems to lack a definite knee and the near hind foot looks broken. And maybe make the eye a different color, but you're still working on it sooo o3o

Other than that it's a neat sprite~ like to see it finished :L

Yea Me too! Since especially love the bright colors you have the sprite.

M'kay I'll see if I can get some more line fixing done today

I love this dragon idea *-*

*Stalks stalks*

The chest looks rather large and the arms misplaced, moving them forward a tad and adding some definition would really help them out. The back legs could use some definition as well. c: And the mane should follow the curve of the neck and show less on the outer curve of the neck.

And when using yellow, it's better to dip into the orange hues as you go darker, since just descending straight leaves the yellow looking muddy and very gross.

These certainly have potential, though!

Off topic here but I'm just loving your sprites in your siggie XD
The second one is my fav and I can't stop staring at it <3

m'kay fix the knee and foot, move the arms forward a bit ,shift the mane a bit to the left, more contrast and shift the shading into the orangey range.

anything else?